怎么样安插解说稿:以观众为导向 & 声音变化

真心出品:1.演说设计通过、预期及观众其实影响;2.怎么着从观众角度考虑,幸免和观众爆发观念顶牛;3.怎么着成功CC
project 的渴求;4. 你们要的Q&A;

CC6目标:

1.变通音量、音调、语速和音色,反映您要传达的情节,伸张音信的内涵和意趣;

2.适用停顿,提高信息的身分;

3.理所当然流畅地变化声音

以下是《如何干脆利落地分手》讲演稿英文版(Break up,once and for
all)。我将结合解说稿每个段落,分析摘要中的1.2.3 点。第4点在最终。

Last week I told you that my mother loved the drama. She was unsatisfied
with my straight breaking up.

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1.drama:承上启下,预热气氛

2.straight breaking
up:上一遍发言内容真的有囊括分手后拉黑的剧情,而那五次解说内容就是为啥要干脆,如何是好到干脆。所以用这一句作为先导。

[为观众考虑]

写黑板:“straight 干脆的”
。其实自己演说稿里面对于初级学习者来说相比较高档的词如故有诸多的,考虑把那一个词写在小黑板上:(1)引申义知道的人不多;(2)那个词和大旨涉及非常连贯;(3)不太简单通过上下文和神采猜度词义

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“straight”前后停顿0.5秒,重读(注意和观众眼神交换)

Several days ago, she asked me again, “ He didn’t come to wait
downstairs to talk with you for even once? It turned out that he was not
that into you. He didn’t love you!”Deep in my heart I wanted to roll my
eyes and make this gesture at her.

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1.抓住注意力:观众喜欢听故事(ba gua);

  1. 和观众拉中距离:自曝和自嘲那两大招一向都很好用;

  2. 雁过拔毛悬念:我究竟是怎么分手的,人家都不来找我了。

[见机行事]

此处更加设计了一个表情(伸手用中指推眼镜,严肃脸,看天花板)观众们没有笑,真是失望。于是融入“当日单词”:salty(bitter
mood),低头作悲哀状,小声说“I am a little salty” ——

1.不论观众有没有笑,总算达成Grammarian布署的职分;

  1. 一经没有get 到笑点,观众也如故得以承受自嘲的架势;

3.自嘲未来,解说者自己不会因为观众反响未达预期而影响接下去的表明(观众居然不笑,婴儿心中咸!)

But I controlled myself, keeping my face blank, “No. I never expected
that. I make sure of that. I already told him on Wechat that I had
thought it over for ten days and that was my final decision. Plus, I
left him with a badminton bat, which means “一拍两散”  .

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1.此段为了操纵时间(发轫用时占全篇用时10-20%为宜,需在彩排中规定和调动时长)有删减内容,留下一个笑点(可是没人笑);

2.
先期展现效果:安分守己我的步子走,保障你的诀别一劳永逸,绝不优柔寡断!

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1.引号中间每一句后边0.5秒停顿,前两句和第三句前半段用云淡风轻的响动说;

2.“ten days” 和 “my final decision” 一字一顿重读(和观众目光交换)

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率先句严穆脸,第二句果决脸,第三句神秘的微笑脸。

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“which means” 后暂时加“I have to say it in Chinese”
,也是给观众反应时间;

唯有自身的包子(Mentor)无奈地笑了!算了,任其自然,往下说吧。回放视频,原来是自身把bat(主要的“拍”!)那些词漏掉了,难怪观众没get到。所以亲爱的们,可以交代小伙伴用你的手机帮您拍摄像,那样您可以很清楚地理解自己的难题在哪儿

I don’t know how many of you enjoy the drama of “breaking up and back
together again and again”. For me I prefer a once-and-for-all style. I
still have to find my true love. The last thing I want is that my
potential true love misunderstands that I already have a boyfriend! For
girls who dislike drama, I have three personal suggestions to share with
you.

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实际那里也算起来,不过算进去初始就太长了,所以算过渡吧(无耻脸)。考虑过要不要全删掉,可是依旧留下了(已经去除某些“不想浪费时间和生命力”的始末),因为:

1.
不想大家认为自身是个严酷惨酷的人,表明自己怎么要“干脆地分别”,争取观众的明白;

2.或者一大半女人分开都是不干脆的(说错了请拍砖),想减轻大家对“干脆分手”的反感,所以用“I
don’t know”先导,希望显得比较谦虚一些;

  1. “true love”:为那多少个必要掌握怎么样干脆分手 &
    不清楚为何要干脆分手的人点亮愿意之灯:你们还有真爱要去追寻!别拖了!

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实际我CC5就想做那几个标题的演说,但是怕引起价值观争论,不知情该怎么处理。Why?因为毕竟半数以上情景下,分手是一件悲忧伤楚的业务。

1.本人不想让观众(越发是男生)觉得自家不强调心情,漠视他们(单身&非单身)的感情;

2.
有同伴前边跟自家说,听了自身的解说,从自我的角度了解了前女友的想法,终于了然前女友要追求的甜美和睦给不了,他就对分手那件事释然了(婴儿很洋洋得意!做个解说分享自己的经历,不仅让大家以为好玩,还解了someone的心结,比拿了十万软妹币出场费还美滋滋!)

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无。大势所趋。入戏的时候如何表情就怎么样表情。

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没有专门的响动设计,不过“true
love”那两句的动静可能相比夸张,两句话都尚未刹车,喷薄而出,
带一点点哭腔的呼号(有人笑了,蛮意外的)。

Step One: Make up your mind

There is always a special moment when you suddenly discover, or finally
decide, “this is not the guy I want to be with”, or “I deserve a better
one”. When this moment comes, keep calm. Think it over. If you
understand that it would be best for both of you if you were apart,make
that decision. If you don’t make up your mind, it’s natural for you to
be persuaded by your boyfriend to stay. And then——the drama of “breaking
up and back together again and again” is on.

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1.为了把解说控制在七分钟以内,有删减内容

2.“moment”
那一句是为了接通,引出下文。没悟出也起到了协理男性观众知道女生想法的作用。

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1.“moment”
的情节:作为女人,我透过如此的瞬,对女孩子的心气真是太懂了,这一句会引起共鸣;

2.“Keep calm. Think it
over”:泣血提出,不表明;我们要得体认真地对待每一段关系,离开当然要想掌握;

3.“If you don’t make up your
mind”:打预防针。若是你们不欣赏“分合大戏”,听了我的发言,依旧去演“分合大戏”,我不是白讲了。所以要把可能后果讲了然,也是挑起观众对这些中央的着重。

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从那里伊始是发言内容的中坚,声音设计浮现得相比多。“Step“那一句为小标题,要中断1分钟;段落截止后,停顿2-3分钟,给观众时间去消化这么些新闻。以下三段都是那般。

1.“keep calm”、“Think it over” 和“make that decision”
是至关主要内容,又是短句,一字一顿重读,目光沟通,手势合营(CC5目的:身体语言)

  1. “stay” 拖长、重读:那是不干脆分手的结果,要强调

3.别样没那么紧要的始末,比如“If”指点的规范句和“the
drama”那一句,上下文有接近内容,明白难度也比较小,可以确切加速语速。

Step Two: Build a safe way out

Your ex-to-be may well know where you live! And may even have the key to
your apartment! It never does you any good if he holds any grudge
against you! Doctor Vincent will tell you it is impossible to fully know
about human nature! You have to consider your own security! So you would
better say something nice to him, praise him, thank him for all the nice
things he has done for you. In doing this, you make yourself look decent
and elegant. Most importantly, this is the the best way for your heart
to say “Goodbye”.

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1.为了把演讲控制在七分钟之内,有删减内容(不要斥责、怪罪对方,不要说对方缺点,解释这样做为啥一贯不用)

2.
为了演说内容更连贯,观众更易于精晓,临时调整这一段的次第,加上最终两句的内容(Lien编剧亲身经历的果实,浓缩为两句话,不领会有些许人能懂

3.“Doctor
Vincent”那一句:(1)和观众互动,活跃气氛(我们果然觉得好玩)(2)文森特接下去要做关于ICU内情的演讲,正好为他暖场(作为医师,真的比相似人对性格有更长远的体悟,我也明白那样提他不会变色的)(3)转移大旨,不想让大家认为是自个儿经历了何等糟糕的业务(神秘的微笑脸)

[为观众考虑]

1.这一段:首即使为着提示女子,现在各样人身安全事件太多啦

2.终极一句:体谅每个人离开一段关系都会有留恋的心理

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1.带惊叹号的前四句:大声,目光交换;

2.“heart”重读,辅导读者丰硕精晓

Step Three is quite easy. Just break up with him through e-mail,
telephone, Wechat, or face to face. Choose a way which is proper and
effective for you. Once my male friend suggested me to break up on
telephone to show some respect. I suffered for two more months just
because l couldn’t speak out the words!

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1.有删减和要旨关系不大的情节;

2.诠释列举这一个分手形式的来由:不是无所谓那段关系,实在是说不出口啊!

3.比喻“male
friend”的提出,争取男性观众知道
:我不是不讲究孩他爸,实在是不干脆分不断手啊!

4.比较谨慎地不添加过多私人经历:(1)观众未必想听;(2)和宗旨无关(时间有限);(3)自己不想讲。

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“two more months” 和“speak out the words!
”拖长、重读:血泪教训,当然要强调啦

Anyway that’s my lesson. Now you have broken up with your boyfriend
through Step One:making up your mind; Step Two, preparing for a safe way
out and Step Three, straightly breaking up. Congratulations. However, A
tough task remains to be finished. That is, tell this news to your
parents who is still dreaming about your marriage. Your parents may have
a more difficult time than your new ex! Don’t worry,I have three master
strokes to help you.

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1.“Anyway” 过渡句:把大家从惨痛的心情中拉出来

2.“Now” 计算要点;

3.“However”引出下文;

4.尾数第三句和最后几个第二句:强调任务的劳累性(个人经历,相信也是中国国情),铺垫“三大招”的要求性;

5.“Don’t worry”
引起观众担忧之情后给个出路:快来听!本来排练时打算加上“In fact this
is the very part I would like to share with you, which may be the key
part of my speech. Listen
carefully!”不过临场发挥的时候忘记了(从而排练很重点!假如仔细准备的点忘记了,多可惜!

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写黑板: “Master stroke  大招”:

(1)这一个短语我通过汉英词典查到,在词典里面释义是“绝招”,我改成“大招”:流行词嘛,朗朗上口;(2)会议起先前大家就会看到,成立悬念清劲风趣气氛;(3)提示大家留意干货分享:在自己说到那些词的时候(再添加手势),他们的大脑就会把自家说的单词和黑板上的释义联系起来。

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“Anyway”那一句:拗不过复苏inner peace 的声音;

“step”的那一个排比句:Step one/two/three
后暂停1分钟;每一个小点后抛锚1-2分钟;

Congratulations:轻松的声音,亲切的微笑,就是那种经典的“祝贺”脸。(那里是想创设一点喜剧效果——把干脆地分开当作一件有挑衅性的天职——但是大家没什么反应);

4.  “dreaming about your marriage”和“more difficult
time”:用夸张的语调描绘出冷冰冰的实际(变相委婉的逼婚和变相委婉的过问);

5.  “new ex”:一字一顿重读:强调你碰巧成功分离啦!

6.  最后一句语气缓下来

Stroke one:keep your boyfriend away from your parents. When you have a
relationship and you are not ready to marry, don’t ever tell them the
good sides of your boyfriend, especially the strong points for
marriage.  Otherwise they may try to talk you back into that
relationship!

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写到那里一度过去几个钟头,实在没力气详细分析了,姑且概括为我的“编剧天赋”,以下两段同,倘若有怎么样想问的(包蕴花絮),赞赏我(歌声绕梁坏笑脸)。

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Stroke one/two/three
后戛然则止1分钟;“Stroke“那一句后,要暂停1分钟;段落停止后,停顿2-3分钟,给观众时间去消化这个信息。以下两段都是那样。

1.“don’t ever” 一字一顿重读(力度和“make that
decision”几乎):前方干货预警

2.  “good……”、“ strong ……marriage” 和“talk……back”的back:强调重点词

3.  末尾一句:夸大其词语调,营造危害感,引起观众赏识

Secondly, prepare your parents physically in advance. Complain to them
about how mean he treats you. Make stories if it is necessary. I am here
if you need me.

“Complain” 重读(那是大招啊!大招啊!)

“Make stories”:有意思疾首蹙额的语调(嘿嘿,有人笑了)。

末了一句低声快捷说:(1)非关键内容;(2)我的宣传理念是:做广告要低调优雅有内涵,表现得心神不安才能接收好效益(立志做个低调优雅的广告人/编剧)

Thirdly, make sure your parents see your performance. Before breaking
up——“To be or not to be, is the question. Life, is just, endless, pain”
After breaking up——“I felt so alive!Life is amazing!Life is so
beautiful!Endless possibilities are open!”Your parents will be as
happy as your potential true love to see you are single again!

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1.自然第二句本来是平昔不的,主要通过身体语言表现,但是觉得相比纯真粗俗没调性,和本人一定高冷优雅的风骨不协调,和解说的品格也不和谐,显得很突兀,也未必很有幽默效果,于是临时改掉。

2.末尾一句也是半路冒出来的灵感:(1)用半间不界的千姿百态说出正经的原形:父母都是爱儿女的,都是为着子女的甜蜜而幸福;(2)把注意力从“分手”拉到“真爱”下面,给大家期待:现在开始!追求真爱!(嗯,CC7
speech 我要做什么追求真爱的解说,敬请期待!)

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那是CC6目的“声音转变”的美观浮现!下方高能预警!

1.“see your performance”
一句一顿:主旨句诶,关键内容提醒,抓回观众注意力

2.  “Before/After breaking up”
:庄敬脸,一字一顿(以前和后来距离可大了!一定要重读)那是场地切换句,很关键的,认真念。

3.  SHOW
ON!!!——分离前:声音低落伤心,叹气徘徊;分手后:声音洪亮高兴,满脸微笑,两眼放光;

4.  最后一句,重读“potential true love” 和“single”
,用“终于起死回生”的提神语调。

Those three master strokes(绝招)will save you tons of  time to deal
with your parents.Those are my personal suggestions. I wish you all fill
find true love and enjoy happiness in your romantic relationship.

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1.匆忙结尾 临场发挥的时候,忘记第一句讲没讲了==

因为时间有限被砍掉的 Q & A session

Q:请问Lien 小姐,你究竟谈过五次恋爱?怎么有如此痛的会心(丰盛的经历)?

A:“我……(摊开双手,看了看)我不确定究竟谈过三回,因为咩有一遍真爱啊!”

心头戏:别说我是salty dog!(本次meeting 被玩坏的生词:salty
dog,有同伴给出神翻译:老驾驶员,我那生意翻译甘心跪倒)微信心思测试结果说我是白莲花!纯洁度百分百!要相信科学!

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